How to Make Your College Activities List Stand Out: Tips from Coach Jun
When it comes to college applications, many students tend to overlook the importance of the activities list, often treating it as a simple checklist of clubs and volunteer work. However, as Coach Jun from Elo explains, this section can be a powerful tool to showcase your unique story and make your application memorable. Whether you’re applying to UC schools, Common App colleges, or both, mastering how to present your activities can significantly boost your chances of admission. Here’s a comprehensive guide based on Coach Jun’s insights on crafting an impactful activities list.
Why the Activities List Matters
Many students underestimate the activities section because it feels like just a list. Admissions officers, however, spend only about 1.5 to 2 minutes reviewing this part of your application. In that brief time, they look for action, clarity, and impact — qualities that distinguish a forgettable list from a compelling snapshot of your achievements.
Generic entries like “volunteered at a camp” won’t capture their attention. Instead, they want to see purposeful descriptions that highlight what you did, how you did it, and the difference you made.
The SWI Method: Your Formula for Success
Coach Jun introduces the SWI method for writing strong activity blurbs:
- S — Strong Verb: Start with a powerful, dynamic verb like led, organized, created, coached, or launched. Avoid weak phrases like “was responsible for” or “did.”
- W — What: Clearly state what you actually did. Be specific about your role and responsibilities.
- I — Impact: Quantify your results or describe the meaningful outcomes of your efforts. Use numbers when possible (e.g., “raised $2,000,” “coached 15 students”), or describe qualitative effects, such as building confidence or fostering teamwork.
Example:
- Weak: “Volunteered at a hospital.”
- Strong: “Supported 20+ Spanish-speaking patients weekly by translating, tracking vitals, and preparing intake notes for nurses.”
Practice Makes Perfect: Refining Your Descriptions
Take a vague entry like “tutored students in math” and make it stand out by adding specifics and impact:
- Who did you tutor? (Middle schoolers, peers, etc.)
- What subject? (Algebra, calculus, geometry)
- How often? (Weekly, during the school year)
- What results? (Improved quiz scores by 20%, helped students earn A or above)
Examples from Coach Jun:
- “Coached 15 middle schoolers weekly in algebra, raising quiz scores by 20%.”
- “Led after-school math sessions for underserved students; designed worksheets, tracked progress, and built confidence in algebra and geometry.”
Formatting Tips to Save Space and Boost Clarity
Both the Common App and UC applications have strict character limits, so every word counts. Here are some formatting hacks:
- Use numerals (“3” instead of “three”).
- Use symbols like “+” for “more than” and “&” for “and.”
- Group similar roles or repeated activities together instead of listing them multiple times.
- Avoid full sentences and unnecessary words like “successfully” or “was responsible for.”
- Omit periods to save characters.
For example:
- “Founded club, tripled membership & hosted 3 citywide events.”
- “Led junior instructors to teach 3 STEM camps over 2 summers with 100+ attendees.”
Understanding Differences Between Common App and UC Applications
- Common App: 10 activity slots with 150 characters each. Requires concise, punchy summaries. Prioritize your top five activities.
- UC Application: Up to 20 entries with 350 characters each. Allows for more depth and detail. Awards are included within activities, not a separate section.
Tailor your descriptions accordingly. Common App needs brevity, UC allows for more storytelling.
What Admissions Officers Look For
Admissions officers value:
- Leadership: Even small leadership roles count if you can show growth or impact.
- Longevity and Growth: Sticking with activities over time and taking on bigger roles matters.
- Results: Numbers and tangible outcomes are powerful.
- Unique combinations: For example, being both a programmer and musician stands out.
- Connection to your goals: Activities tied to your intended major are helpful, but don’t limit yourself to only academic-related extracurriculars. Diverse interests show you’re well-rounded.
Common Mistakes to Avoid
- Turning your activities list into mini essays. Keep it brief and impactful.
- Using passive voice or vague descriptions.
- Repeating the same sentence structure for every entry.
- Assuming admissions readers understand technical jargon—be clear and specific.
- Listing the same experience multiple times instead of grouping it.
Remember, your essays are where you tell your deeper story. The activities list is your highlight reel.
Final Tips for Success
- Start early: Crafting strong activity descriptions takes time and revisions.
- Keep a master document: Use a Google Doc or sheet to track and tweak your entries for different applications.
- Seek feedback: Ask teachers, counselors, or trusted advisors to review your blurbs for clarity and impact.
- Use available resources: Coach Jun recommends the official UC PDF guide for activities and the SWI Worksheet to help structure your entries.
- Balance your list: Showcase a variety of interests and leadership experiences to present a well-rounded profile.
Conclusion
Your activities list is more than a mundane formality—it’s a vital opportunity to show admissions officers who you are beyond grades and test scores. By using the SWI method, focusing on action and impact, and tailoring your entries to the application format, you can create a compelling snapshot of your accomplishments. Remember, your activities provide the proof of your story; your essays provide the meaning. Together, they make a powerful combination that can set you apart in the competitive college admissions process.
Need more help? Coach Jun and Elo offer support including worksheets, templates, and free advising sessions to help you perfect your application. Start early, stay organized, and let your activities shine!
Good luck with your college applications!