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Hello everyone. Welcome. We'll get
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started in just a few seconds.
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All right, welcome to our webinar on
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leadership is not just a title. How to
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show your impact in your applications.
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Uh for today, what we're going to be
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focusing on is what colleges actually
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look for when we think about leadership.
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Um the three ways to show leadership
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without a title, three biggest mistakes
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students make, and writing powerful
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descriptions. Uh something to consider
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is that leadership roles are still very
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much important, right? But it's more so
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of a matter of it's not the end all be
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all, meaning that you don't necessarily
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always need to aim for the president or
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vice president role within your uh club.
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Um but what it does offer though for
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those particular titles is that it gives
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you ability to have leverage and be able
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to uh create an impact. So we'll talk
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about a little bit more about that and
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specifically what is it that you can do
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within the leadership role or even
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without that leadership title itself. Uh
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for quick housekeeping if you don't mind
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just drop your high school to graduation
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year in the chat. Kind of curious about
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who else is here in the room with me.
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And also if you have any questions
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throughout this uh webinar feel free to
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drop in a Q&A and of course replay notes
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will always be available. Uh quick
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background on myself if this is your
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first time meeting me. I'm Coach Victor
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with Eagle. And for me, uh I used to
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work at the admissions office at UC
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Berkeley as outreach coordinator and
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getting to graduate school instructor.
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Uh where I went to different high
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schools to teach about the college
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admissions process and also I taught a
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whole class about uh starting your grad
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school apps and being able to get in.
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Also a fun fact for myself uh I did uh
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work at the San Francisco Unified School
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District along with other uh education
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technology places and nonprofits and
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furthermore I was a UC Berkeley full
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ride scholar uh for undergrad and
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graduate school. So that being said uh
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leadership has was definitely something
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that I definitely participated in and
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I'll share a little bit tidbits of how I
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was able to show that impact uh
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throughout this webinar as well. So,
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first off, let's start talking about
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what colleges actually look for. Okay,
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when it comes to um people's thought
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about leadership, people tend to think
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that you need to be a club president to
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show leadership. Now, what is it? Well,
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like why is uh a title important
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anyways? Like titles do actually do ma
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they do they do matter, right? Uh titles
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give you leverage, access to more
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opportunity and also there is a bit of
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um kind of assumptions uh with titles
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that are associated with it. But
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underneath the titles what they really
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care about is are you one able to take
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initiative or starting something new. Uh
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what this kind of uh demonstrates to is
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like the activities help us know that uh
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you don't necessarily need to wait until
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college to start learning about your
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particular major or start learning about
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your interests. Taking initiative means
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that you're doing it now. You don't
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necessarily need to wait till somebody
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actually gives you something to be able
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to work with. So again the what you want
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to try to demonstrate here is that um
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you don't have to wait for someone to
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create that opportunity for you.
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Secondly is the problem solving aspect.
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Uh are you able to uh think critically
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and be able to be a problem solver?
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Right? Uh because in the world there's
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tons of problems, tons of situations
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where we need leaders to step up and to
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be able to do something about the
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situation. And there's a sense of um
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kind of uh agency and also altruism in
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this case, right? About being able to uh
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solve problems not just for yourself but
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also for others. And I guess that kind
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of goes into the next part about making
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a positive impact. Uh what these
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colleges want to know is that if we were
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to accept you into our university, would
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you be able to affect those around you
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and also uh contribute towards our
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campus climate? And that's why the
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leadership aspect is really important
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because they would expect that if you
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were to take a step up, you were to
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volunteer for these roles or participate
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in these clubs, you would participate in
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the community. So what they want to
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understand is will you uh not just study
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all day in your dorm or in your uh in
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your own residence, but more so will you
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actually take the time to be able to
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think about how can you positively
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influence other people? Uh furthermore,
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collaborating with others, right? Are
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you someone that's easy to work with?
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Because uh you don't want to go into
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university full of people that are just
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not willing to work with others. The
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whole point of the activities also is to
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you know demonstrate your social skills
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that you are willing to collaborate,
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willing to work with others because when
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you're part of a campus climate, you're
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going to be working with tons of diverse
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people. People that you uh don't really
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understand their background. You might
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have a different demographic background
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such as your race, ethnicity, gender,
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and so forth. And also you probably grew
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up in a different location. They want to
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know that can you live cohabitally with
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each other and can you create a cohesive
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community amongst each other. And lastly
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demonstrating growth and reflection.
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What um this really is important. It's
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it's about your why, right? Like what
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did you gain from the experience? Why is
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it so important to you? Because we don't
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do activities just for the sake of doing
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it. We don't do it just because it feels
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good, but because there is a particular
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deeper meaning in everything that we we
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do. So that's that's really important to
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be able to demonstrate that uh maturity,
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that kind of intellectual curiosity and
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that you are able to learn from these
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moments and that it influences what you
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want to do from here. Typically, right,
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your activities that you're doing right
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now has taught you something. It taught
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you about something about yourself,
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about what you're interested in or about
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what you want to do later on in your
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college and career. And so you want to
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be able to articulate that within your
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application process.
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So the let's talk about the ways to be
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able to show leadership without a title.
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And again just to kind of um make it
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very clear, right? Title is uh important
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but not necessary. Meaning like I don't
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want you to take away from this webinar
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that you shouldn't like try to step up.
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You shouldn't try to like take on those
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roles for those clubs. but more so like
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it's still totally possible to
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demonstrate all these characteristics
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without a title. And the title all it
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does is just it gives you leverage to be
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able to do so because if you were
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technically a president of some kind of
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club you have more agency autonomy and
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people probably voted you in into that
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particular role because they believe in
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you. So in a way titles are like a bit
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of like a social proof that they um that
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your community has voted you in or wants
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you to be in that role. Yet at the same
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time know that uh titles don't mean
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everything because almost anybody can
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come up with a title. But if you can't
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so if you can't talk about what what you
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actually did within your title then it
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means nothing. uh if you you were to
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compare two students, let's say one
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person was like a president of a club,
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but another was just a member, but the
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member was clearly able to articulate
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their impact, their problem solving,
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their initiative, all those things. That
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will look more effective than someone
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who just said, "I was a president of
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this club and they can't speak to what
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they did because in ways people are
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probably just making it up then." So
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again, title is important but not
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necessary and uh so I don't want you to
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get the wrong idea of not to try to uh
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take that next step. But there are three
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ways to show uh leadership without a
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title. One is the initiator. Okay, the
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initiator is somebody who is willing to
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start something that no one else is
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willing or brave enough to do. So for
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example, Sophia noticed her school
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lacked resources for mental health. She
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organized a mental health awareness week
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and partnered with counselors to lead
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sessions. It became an annual event.
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So what Sophia did here, right, was that
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she identified an issue that was
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pertinent to her community, right? This
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is kind of part of the problem solving
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aspect as well, but um what's important
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is that she was doing it for a
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particular reason and also she noticed
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that they were lacking a particular
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solution or program. So essentially what
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she did was that Sophia created
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something from scratch, right? She came
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up with the ideas that no one else
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thought about or was brave enough to
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initiate. And what's also what's great
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about here that she did was that she
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worked with counselors. So, it's not
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just a matter of I'm going to do this by
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myself, but she collaborated with other
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uh staff
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members to uh to create something that
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is longlasting because she created
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something that became an annual event.
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That means that there is an impact, a
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long-term impact that is uh going to
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stay with that community for a long
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time. And another kind of example,
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right, is
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like I always bring this example like
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what if you were to organize like a
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beach cleanup. Okay, usually beach
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cleanups, they're great and all that
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you're cleaning up the environment, but
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the thing is that beach cleanup is that
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one day event. The goal is to be able to
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show that you're creating a systemic
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impact or a long-term impact. And so
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like if I were to remove you from the
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picture, would that event would that
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impact still exist? And so by being able
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to create an annual event with her
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especially staff members that creates
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some longevity in there and this is
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super important because uh Sophia is not
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just impacting her classmates at that
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particular year but she's impacting the
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future years uh above her um that comes
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into that school. And so that is what
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the universities are looking for. Can
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you create a long-term systemic impact
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and you're not just doing a one-off kind
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of event here as well. All right. Next
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thing is the problem solver. So this was
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kind of embedded in the last one, but uh
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let's dig into the specific example. So
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Alex found his uh robotics club had poor
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attendance. He redesigned the club's
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meeting format, created social media
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account, and increased attendance by
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60%. Okay. Similarly to the last one,
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Alex found uh identified a problem,
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right? And I would say uh it might be
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even more powerful if we can talk about
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why attendance is important. So uh
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insert why attendance is important. for
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example, right? Like um uh attendance is
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necessary to uh really it really in in
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uh details like is this club uh really
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impactful for students or do do students
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actually find this valuable or that uh
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people are able to really take advantage
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of this opportunity, right? And so if
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you're able to talk a little bit more
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about why was this attendance important
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to you or important to the club itself,
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then that can kind of amplify the way
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that you talk about this. And then
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furthermore, when he talks about
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redesigning um the club meeting format,
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create a social media account, right?
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That shows uh demonstrates like
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creativity to uh to resolve this
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particular
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problem. If he wanted to also amplify
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this, right? And let's say he was to
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write this in a personal insight
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question or a personal statement.
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Another way to amplify this is to talk
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about why did you decide to redesign the
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meeting format or create a med social
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account. The importance of that right is
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because in ways you can solve this
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problem of attendance in so many ways,
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right? You don't necessarily have to
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create a social media account or do the
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meeting format. You could also do um
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active recruitment. You can tell
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everyone to bring one friend. You can uh
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post flyers around campus, right? And if
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you were to transform this not just into
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an activity statement put to write into
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a personal statement or sorry not just
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an activity like description but into a
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personal statement you can go in a
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little bit deeper about how like how did
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you come to the conclusion that these
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specific things were the most powerful
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uh strategies to use and then from there
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you can be able to talk about the impact
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and the impact being increase attendance
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by 60%. And if you want to take this
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again a little bit further, right, what
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um what uh was the impact due to the
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attendance? The goal isn't necessarily
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just to increase attendance. the goal
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for attendance is for like increasing
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retention or to increase the amount of
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uh reach around the school that you're
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able to show that you have some type of
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impact that more students are being
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exposed to robotics or something of that
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sort. When you dig in a little bit
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deeper about why each of these things
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are so important, it really shows a
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sense of critical thinking and maturity
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that you're not just doing it for the
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sake of doing it because it looks good
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for a college application, but you're
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doing it because you understand that
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there is a deeper meaning behind
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everything. And so these are the
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potential areas that one can actually
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expand much further within the personal
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statements. All right, let's go. Last
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one is the connector. Okay. So, the
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connector is someone who is able to
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bring community or create community
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together. So, Anita didn't lead a club,
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but she brought together classmates and
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local nonprofits to start a weekend
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volunteer program leading to over 300
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hours of community service. So, this is
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kind of very similar to what we saw from
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the um the initiator, right? Because it
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looks like the initiation here was to be
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able to bring together classmates and
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local nonprofits. So I would say like
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you know this demonstrates uh
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initiation and also the uh sheer number
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of people if you wanted to kind of
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enhance this I would say to try to
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include the number of uh classmates and
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nonprofits so that way you can kind of
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quantify here and to start a weekend
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volunteer program. Again, if you were to
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move this into like a personal
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statement, the importance is like why
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what is the problem you're trying to
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for? And leading to over 300 hours of
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community service, which is great, but
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also again to answer like why was this
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community service
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important? I can guarantee you that so
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many students are doing volunteer
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service, right? and they think that just
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having volunteer hours is what will lead
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them to getting admitted into these
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schools. That is not the case. Yes,
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hours are important, but that is just
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one part of the picture. The most
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important understanding is why is this
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community service? Why is participating
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in these things so important to the
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community? Because you don't want people
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to just do things because it feels good
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or it looks good, but they're doing it
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because it actually matters. That's why
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I mentioned in this last example, why is
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attendance so important? Because there
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are so many things that you could focus
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on. There's so many things that you
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could do, but you decided to focus on
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this one particular metric was the
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attendance. In this case, uh this
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student Nina was trying to focus on
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community service. And so if you can
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expand on why did you decide to do this
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particular community service as opposed
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to all the other things that you could
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have done instead, right? that shows
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that you are um really valuing your time
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and valuing uh the quality of the work
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that you produce. And so for here,
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right, the connector what it does is
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it's also able to um uh bring people
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together to uh act upon a common cause,
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right? And this is essentially a little
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bit like sales and recruitment in a way,
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right? Uh these skills are important
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because in order to
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uh convince people to participate in
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community service or in a common cause,
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you have to be able to be persuasive and
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be able to demonstrate that you can get
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people to uh do something that they
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initially weren't inclined to do. And by
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you being able to demonstrate those
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sales and recruitment skills, you are
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showing that you have a ability to
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positively influence others around you.
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All right. So these are again the kind
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of three major ways that you could be
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able to do it. Uh if you kind of notice
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right each of these did have like an
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overlap with each other but and so in
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ways right you don't want to just do one
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of these. You want to do all three of
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them if you can into your um into your
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activities. And again, if you wanted to
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expand this and put it into a PIQ or to
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a personal insight question or personal
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statement, this is ways that you can be
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able to elaborate on it by talking about
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the why. And uh pro tip too, at the very
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end of every single personal statement,
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you always want to connect it
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to connect it to your future, whether
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that be what you want to study,
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accomplish, or achieve.
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um uh in your
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uh careers or college. Okay. So if you
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can connect what did this teach you
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about like what kind of person that you
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want to be like for example maybe that
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you will always want to be of in service
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of other people or in for particular
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communities. you can uh you can you can
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kind of demonstrate that like for
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example for myself uh when I talked
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about like a lot of my community service
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way back in the day, I would always talk
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about how it was so important for me to
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be able to come back to my old my city
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which is East San Jose to be able to
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give back to the community in some type
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of uh capacity and by going to college I
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will be able to learn this particular
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new experience or learn this new skill
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that will help me contribute back to my
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community. So again, your your your goal
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is to connect your learnings. What did
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each of your activities teach you about
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yourself? And then what is it that
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you're going to learn in college? And
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how would that lead how all of that lead
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to you being able to execute on your
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future goals or your core
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values? All right, so let's go next
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section, which is the three biggest
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mistakes uh students make. Okay, one is
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listing titles without explaining what
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they did. All right, this is a pretty
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common one that we've seen a lot of
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times. So, vice president of the
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environmental club. Okay, cool. So, like
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what did you actually do? So, um again,
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this is where titles can be very
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misleading, right? Like it's great that
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you're vice president. Cool. Uh now,
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what did you actually do uh within that
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role? And so a stronger way to rewrite
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it is led weekly cleanup events and
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organized Earth Day campaign that
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brought 200 plus students together to
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reduce carbon emission. Right? What I
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like here is that there was a strong
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action verb which is led weekly uh
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cleanup events and organized Earth Day
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campaign. What I love is that this right
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here is a recurring kind of activity.
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This like shows that it's not just a
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one-off thing. It's something that is
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ongoing. organize Earth Day campaign.
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Okay, campaigns are huge because
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campaigns are about trying to address a
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particular issue. So this shows like a
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um like a problem solving. This shows
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initiation, right? And that brought 200
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students together. So the number of
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people so this is the connector, right?
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So this is connector.
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This is uh the problem
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solving and this is the initiation
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here and then to reduce carbon emission.
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This is the why. Okay. And that's why
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this is really important. Of course, uh
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if there was more uh words uh allowed in
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the uh common app, uh you'd be able to
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write a lot more if you could expand
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onto it, right? than being able to
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demonstrate even more about what was the
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result of it. Like if you can quantify
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the carbon emission, I mean that's kind
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of really difficult to be quite honest.
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Um but like aside from being able to
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connect people together, right? That is
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an input. What was the actual uh impact?
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Yes, reduce carbon emission but like is
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there a way to quantify the impact of
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like um establishing like maybe you can
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say that you have uh kind of
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institutionalize a weekly cleanup event
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at the school that is going to be
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longlasting. Maybe you can talk about
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how um I don't know there was a
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reduction of like reported litter in a
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particular like uh between certain weeks
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or something like that or uh or maybe
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you did a survey where people like were
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to be able to talk about how much they
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care cared about the environment and
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that you increase the score where people
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actually start caring now. So if you can
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somehow like quantify the impact right
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so providing the y and
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impact and
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calculating the impact right that's
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going to be a way to make it more
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powerful. Okay, next part is big verbs
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like helped, led or was responsible for
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actually. Okay, sorry. Uh, so they led
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was not a strong verb. Maybe in reality
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this could have been a much more I would
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say kind it could be
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initiated, right? So maybe instead of
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lead I would probably would have done
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initiated and format text
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strikeout, right? So, helped LED was
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responsible for uh so strongerware was
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like Stronger Word is like spearheaded
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fundraiser campaign that raised $1,200
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for food shelter that uh oh uh uh feeds
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unhoused families by organizing bake
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sales and community outreach. So, what's
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great here is that this is the most
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common word that almost every single
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student uses. I swear like out of all
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the activities I've read every single
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year and also even for the the common
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applications and the personal
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statements, helped is like so common cuz
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helped can mean so many things. So try
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to be as specific as possible.
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Spearheaded means like you're kind of
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taking initiative. It could be like I
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don't know uh if you just Google like a
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whole bunch of like strong action verbs
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instead of helped, you could probably
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find one that works a lot better. So
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just be careful about your like specific
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wording that you're using. You want to
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show that you're not passive, but you're
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active. And spearheading is an active
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kind of verb here. So, spearheaded
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fundraiser campaign that raised $1,200,
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right? This is like the quantifying the
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impact here, which is great for local
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shelter. Uh, so this is the the good
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part. Uh, for local shelter that feeds
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unhoused families, right? So, this is
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talking about um like the particular
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group that you're trying to serve or the
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kind of population. It's kind of
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inferred, all right, that unhoused folks
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have certain challenges or certain
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issues. So, just be aware that if you
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are trying to support a community like
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let's say like an ethnic community or
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whatever you identify with, uh it's not
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going to be very clear about what
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exactly um do they need or need help
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with. Like unhoused folks makes a lot
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more sense just because like generally
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people have a clear understanding about
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the circumstances that unhoused families
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like do face. And so uh that this makes
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it very easy to talk about. But if
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you're trying to talk about a particular
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group of people like let's say kids or
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teenagers for example, you want to be
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more specific about what their actual
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challenges or problems are. So um I'll
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just put a like a kind of note here that
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uh make sure it is
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clear about the specific problem or
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challenge they are having.
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And then by organizing big sales and
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community outreach. Okay, this is great,
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right? And then maybe if I would expand
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on this, right? Uh organizing big sales
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makes sense. Community outreach, right,
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is kind of vague, I would say. So if I
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could, I would expand. Maybe um
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community outreach can be like
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doortodoor knocking or it could be like
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doing social media campaigns or
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something of that sort. Um when you use
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the word community and use the word
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outreach, these two words are just large
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words that has so much interpretation.
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So try to be uh be more
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specific in terms of your
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verbiage, right? Okay. Uh next one is
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the number three of not showing results
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or change which is pretty
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straightforward, right? So tutored
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students.
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Okay. Obviously, yes. Like you're
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helping, right? Uh for every single
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action, there is always a reaction. Uh
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so the reaction here is that for this
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student, it tutor five classmates
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weekly, helping three improve their
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grades from C to an A in algebra. That's
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awesome. So, uh they quantified the
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number of people they helped. They
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quantified also the duration of how
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frequent this happened. and helping
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three people improve their grades from C
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to A in algebra. Okay, so this uh shows
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that they already had an issue. There
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was already implied issue uh that they
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had low grades and getting to A was the
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result. So uh something that you can
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also expand on this even further is how
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did you tutor them,
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right? Cuz like tutoring, yes, it can
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mean like one-on-one tutoring, right?
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you're teaching. Um, but like there's so
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many tutors out there. Like what's your
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unique way of tutoring? Was it that you
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facilitated a weekly time where after
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school y'all met at one particular
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location? Maybe it was like you
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organized like uh tutoring sessions with
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like like you know snacks and um and
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refreshments uh to make the uh tutoring
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more engaging and motivating for people.
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So there is a probably a reason why
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these students had a C in the first
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place and you want to show that you're
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tackling the root problem here. So let's
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just say like these students they have a
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C because they didn't have strong study
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habits, right? So maybe the way that you
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tutored was like you tutored not just on
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the um the material itself, but maybe
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you also tutored on like uh like how to
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build stronger study habits or student
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like skill sets that other students do
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not typically have. And that shows that
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you have a clear understanding of what
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is their issue, right? like what was the
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root issue behind their low grades.
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So this is showing like again the kind
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of maturity here, right? That you're not
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just doing things on face value, but you
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have a deep understanding of problem
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solving skills here that uh the grades
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are just a symptom, right? Uh but there
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is a particular root cause behind the
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symptom. So the C right here is the
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symptom or the result of the root cause
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and really right uh problem
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solving in a in a way is like root cause
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analysis.
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Why is it that they are experiencing
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these seas in the first
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place? And why did you decide to tutor
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them in your particular way to address
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that root
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issue? Other ways think if you think
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about it, right? It can not might not
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just be study skills, but maybe it could
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be a mindset issue. Maybe they just
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didn't believe in themselves. Maybe they
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had a fixed mindset. So maybe it's not
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just tutoring, but you coach them. you
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coach them to believe in themselves and
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uh and that's that's where like you're
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able to show that you have a unique way
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of tutoring or helping these like
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students
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here. Okay. So let's talk about how to
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write um powerful descriptions and
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essays. So I'm going to introduce the 3C
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pre framework and uh try to make this a
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little bit easier to understand. I used
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to uh if you were in my other webinars
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we talked about SAR right situation
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action result very similarly here but it
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makes it a little bit easier to be able
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to remember. So there is challenge
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contribution and change right challenge
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what problem or gap did you notice our
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school's recycling program has stopped
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and no one knew why. Okay, this is an
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example of like a way to identify that
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particular problem. If you wanted to
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expand on this further, right, maybe
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consider right about
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um how uh or sorry, what was the
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repercussions of the of the school
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recycling program
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uh program being stopped?
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What uh how did you know this was a an
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important
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issue? You want to demonstrate to the
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readers that you have a deep
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understanding like this is an issue and
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that you are empowered to address this
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issue because you know how important it
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is. Everyone is solving for so many
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different things, right? There's so many
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things that everyone could be doing with
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their time, but you decided to take your
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time to focus on this one issue. Why did
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you decide to do that issue? Right? And
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usually it's because you're probably
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passionate about that particular
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challenge that you want to address. So
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this is where you demonstrate it. You
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demonstrate the passion that you have to
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fix this particular um issue and you
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want to describe like why does it matter
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to you so much and this is the
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self-awareness and and the maturity that
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you're able to show. Second is the
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contribution. What did you do to address
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it? So, you met with the principal,
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restarted the club, and create an
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incentive system to increase
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participation. Awesome. Right. What I
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love here, right, it's that they're
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meeting with someone that's a staff
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member, right? Collaboration, right, is
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a important thing
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here. We started the
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club, that's
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initiation, and created an incentive
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system, problem solving. All right. So
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again, this is a way to be able to show
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the three different point points that we
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talked about before and um to increase
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participation. So again, the way that
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you would be able to take this a little
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bit further is why did you decide to do
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these particular actions?
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Like for example um you knew that in
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order to
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uh initiate this school recycle program
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you need the collaboration of leadership
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from people at the school. You know that
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people will listen to the principal and
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so you decided to collaborate with them
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because they are an important
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stakeholder in this process. Uh you
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restarted the club because you knew that
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you needed to create like a systemic uh
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impact where if you were to like be gone
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next year because you're gone to college
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that there needs to be something or some
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group that's still trying to maintain
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this particular uh system here. And
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lastly is create an incentive uh system.
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uh how did you know that there was a
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incentive system that would work right?
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Were you able to like kind of conduct
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focus groups, talk to other students, be
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able to understand like how did you know
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like the incentive system would actually
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work? Did you do some research? So being
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able to show your critical lens here is
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really key. uh your so the contribution
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here it shows like your uh
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characteristics on how you attempt to
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solve problems and demonstrates
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uh your problem solving
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skills. I think I just repeated myself
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in two different ways but you all get my
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point here. Uh and the last point is the
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change. What happened as a result? So
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participation rose from 10 to 50
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students in two months and our school
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diverted 300 lb of waste from the
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landfill. Amazing. Okay, so 10 to 50
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students in two months, right? That
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seems pretty large, right? I I really
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appreciate the duration that is
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expressed here and also the number of
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sheer students. That is like a great way
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to be able to describe that um you had a
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large impact in a short amount of time.
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And our schools diverted 300 lb of waste
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from the landfill. I'm not sure about
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you, but 300 lb of weight sounds pretty
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darn large. So, I would say like this is
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a great way to quantify that. And so, a
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way to um also amplify this is to
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demonstrate like uh what was the kind of
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the status quo in a way like uh being
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able to understand
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um what is typical
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uh waste that is expected from
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from the landfill. So for example, right
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diverted 300 lb of land uh pounds of
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waste, right? Out of how many is there?
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Like is there a denominator or typical
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amount of
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waste, right? Because in a way that's
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like baselining and this shows a lot of
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uh if you're able to baseline and be
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able to show like there was an
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improvement, it's very similar to the 10
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to 50 students. Uh 300 lb sounds like a
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lot, but how do you put it in
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perspective? Uh is there typically like
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a,000 pounds of waste? Does that mean
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that you reduce the waste by 30%. That
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sounds pretty large, right? Uh even the
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10 to 50 students, I mean given like
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let's just assume that your school was a
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small school as well. uh it's possible
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that you can put into perspective about
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how your school is small and like you're
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already capturing about like 20% of the
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population to participate in this club
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or something. So being able to
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uh put the numbers in
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perspective to help readers understand
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what is large or small
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impact.
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Right. Awesome. Okay. So let's go into
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uh examples here to like rewrite the
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activity section. So let's let's
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exercise our uh ability to write these
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activities better. Uh so that way if
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especially if you're a junior right now,
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you're probably trying to write your
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statements right now. So before worked
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at a food bank. Okay, what does working
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mean? What did you actually do? What's
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the point of the food bank? So organized
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monthly food drives distributing over
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2,000 meals and coordinating 15
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volunteers. Awesome. So uh a way to kind
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of strengthen this right is organize
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monthly food drives
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u that does what right there's an
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assumption here that you know food
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drives will give to the community but
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like where does it lead to like does it
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go to unhoused folks does it go to
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low-income families how many families
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did you help right so
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uh so being able to like uh identify
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like who was the audience
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um that you were trying to
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impact, right? Distributing over 2,000
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meals and coordinating 15 volunteers.
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Awesome. So, that sounds like a lot. And
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uh maybe to also put in perspective,
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right? Were you able to increase like
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the number of like meals like compared
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to what like last year like maybe there
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was like only 1,000 meals or maybe 1500
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meals or something like that. If you can
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be able to do that, that shows that you
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not only just participated and organized
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a food event, but you made it better,
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right? So, if you can show the change in
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terms of the output, that shows even
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like a greater impact. And coordinating
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15 volunteers, awesome. And maybe you
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can put a little bit um what does
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coordinating volunteers actually mean?
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Right? So, get more specific
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here. So for example, it could be that
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you were the volunteer coordinator
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coordinator and you like allocated jobs,
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you managed them. Uh this shows
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leadership skills. So the thing about
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these action verbs is that there's so
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much potential to show uh more
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well-roundedness and more specific skill
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sets that you offer to the university.
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So get very specific as much as you can
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and then uh of course always talk about
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the why and try to tie it back to the um
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reason why you're even working at this
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food bank in the first
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place. All right. So let's just say all
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right you
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uh want to get started today. You don't
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necessarily uh know where to get
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started. Okay. Uh this is for and even
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if you wanted to take your leadership
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skills to the next level. The first
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question to ask yourself is what
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problems do you see in your school or
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community? Right? Again, this goes down
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to problem
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solving and also what do you actually
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about? I would say like yes, volunteer
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service is very important for
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admissions,
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but like be real about like what you
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actually care about. And if you're not a
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person that's really into community
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service, then at least think about what
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do you like doing, right? And how can
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you share that impact with other people?
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So um let's just say like if you are not
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inclined to be a ser like of service of
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others uh then at least think about like
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what do you enjoy and how might you
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share that
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enjoyment with other
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people. Other things is uh within
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problems in the community is just like
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what do you hear right from others? Do
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you notice your peers are complaining
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about something? Do you notice that uh a
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particular community that you are a part
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of is particularly frustrated about
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something? Don't do things just for the
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sake of trying to look good for
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leadership. Do things because there is
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something that's worth solving, right?
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uh when it comes to even like the
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workforce and thinking about like all
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these startups and companies that are
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created if you didn't know so many
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startups uh there's a reason they're
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called startups because they create a
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company to solve for a particular issue
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and then a lot of these companies end up
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like being unsuccessful and they fail
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and usually it's because there's not
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enough demand as in like people are not
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willing to purchase the services or the
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goods that they produce because they
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don't have Um they call it product
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market fit. That's a fancy word to say
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that it's not actually solving for a
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problem. Okay, you have to be so able to
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solve for a problem to really matter.
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Next, what is one small step that you
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can take to solve it? Okay, you don't
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have to think about like a massive
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campaign. You don't have to think about
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what can I do to transform everything.
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The goal here is uh just get motivated.
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Just start small. So small steps equals
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small results.
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Right? Can small results lead to more
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motivation? More
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motivation leads to higher
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impact. Right? So what I mean by there
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is build
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momentum. If you start small, you can at
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least be able to take it piece by piece
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and then as you're building that
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momentum, bring others along with you.
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Right? You can't make a large impact by
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doing it by yourself. The whole point of
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this leadership, right, isn't about
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trying to be the one that is able to
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accomplish everything. You are one that
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empowers, inspires, motivates other
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people to be able to participate in this
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particular impact. And the last piece,
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how can you track your results or
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document your growth? Right? Always,
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always, always uh update your
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sheet or resume with your
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results, right?
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uh you and maybe if you uh and also
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another consideration, right? Update
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your LinkedIn if you don't have one
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already because LinkedIn is a great
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place to be able to document all these
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things and you don't want to lose track
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of your impact because imagine this like
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let's say you're writing your common
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application or your personal statements.
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You're working in an activity section
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and you're trying to think about the
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impact that you made back in ninth
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grade. And then you're trying to be able
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to think like, "Oh, okay. I remember
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doing this club, but I didn't track or
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measure anything." And then you end up
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finding out that you don't you can't put
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down any results or that you have to
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make up some number. You don't want to
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do that. So, uh, so keep track. Think
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about this. Think think the long term,
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right? Always document your impact for
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future records. And who knows, you might
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even use it for your resume for like uh
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for applying to
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jobs. All right. Uh so we're going to
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bit of wrap up, right? So again, quick
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summary here. Leadership isn't about
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title. It's about initiative, problem
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solving, and real impact. Also, uh I
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forgot to add there also is
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collaboration
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too. leadership uh is leadership uh
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title is important but it isn't
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necessary right so I still encourage
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everyone to still try to actively uh
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participate in clubs get motivated and
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and try to get into these like higher
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positions because they do matter and it
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doesn't matter because of the title but
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it matters because of the impact that
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you could be making. Second, use
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storytelling and clear results in your
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application, right? Being able to be
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articulate. Uh try to, you know, always
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ask why, quantify, you know, expand on
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it. Don't just start at the very don't
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don't just use basic language. And
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lastly, you can start building your
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leadership story right now. Meaning that
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you don't have to wait for something to
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happen. The whole point about initiative
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or showing initiative is that you can
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start as early as today or tomorrow on
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these issues. If you see a problem, work
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on it. If you're passionate about
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something, just do it. And so, don't
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overthink it. Just take one step at a
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time and then it'll naturally fall into
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place,
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right? All right. And so, that's your
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kind of call to action there, which is
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just to get started. Uh, and so that is
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the end of our webinar just for today.
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And so for those who are new to this
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webinar and you uh really liked what you
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heard, uh you could text coach to be
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call. The goal is just to be able to get
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you started if you haven't engaged with
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our community before. Second, text notes
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and replay to
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949-770865 if you want this recording or
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if you want the notes uh to this Google
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document. And so know that uh this it
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will be made available within 24 48
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hours once we have processed the video
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and um go from there. Aside from that um
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we can go into Q&A. I think we have a
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smaller group today so I imagine there
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might not be too many questions but does
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do folks have any questions about
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anything that we talked about regarding
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leadership?
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All right, I'm hearing none so
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far. So, that being said, I'm going to
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stop this webinar and uh it was uh good
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to be able to present to you all. Hope
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you enjoyed it and uh good luck on terms
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of your activity statements. See youall
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next time.